Revise on WC Essay

According to the grades given by both Ms. Guarino and my peer, I find out that there are a lot of things I still have to work on, in order to make the essay more complete and mature. From the feedback of the most recent draft which is the third draft, I knew that I missed a lot of big part of the essay. I definitely need to have works cited page at the end, and a title page including words count at the beginning of the essay. Also, I need to have more reflection on my group's performance and improvements, mostly focus on my performance and talking about what I did well, what should I work on more, and what improvements did I do to make the performance more alive. Additionally, I am missing the thoughtful, interesting conclusion part which is also an important part of the essay. I should talk about the all in all experience, my feeling about the whole project, also, what influence did I receive through doing this project with group mates. Things that I need to add more information on are, first, the introduction, context or background of the book needed more specifics about the relationship between Amanda, Laura, and Tom. To give a strong background setting for readers to understand the emotion we put in our scene easily. A stronger analytical thesis statement is needed for the essay, I sort of mentioned a little, but it is not strong enough as claiming the thesis of the essay. For analysis of literary features part, I did have a lot of good quotes and analysis in there, but I feel like I talked a lot about all three of the character. The revision needed for this part is that I should be more focus on my character which is Amanda, I need to do more analyzation on Amanda instead of Tom and Laura. Also, for the analysis of the performance that correlates to literary interpretation part, I could use more specific examples and details to make it more deep and solid. Also, there is a lot of punctuation errors appear in the essay; I should work on that as well, make sure not losing the point in the little case. The problem of the good use of topic and ending sentences should be solved after I add in conclusion part and more information at the beginning. There are lots of things to work on still; it is hard to make an essay "perfect." All in all, the main analyzation parts were pretty ok in my opinion.